写作得二流分数的语法错误
<p> 托福写作是以作文的整体水平判分，而不纠结于小细节。但有些同学往往会在语言方面疏漏多多，那样即便你的思路和论证属于一流，最多也只能得个二流分数。小编为您整理托福写作中的七个语法错误，希望大家能规避这些错误。</p><p> 1. 用词不当</p><p> 原：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="absence">absence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="groupwork">groupwork</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="disaster">disaster</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="teenagers">teenagers</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p> 改：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="absence">absence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="teamwork">teamwork</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="disaster">disaster</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="teenagers">teenagers</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p> 评：<span word="groupwork">groupwork</span>是分组或者小组集体任务的意思。这位同学原本想说<span word="teamwork">teamwork</span>团队合作，却用了一个看起来很像，但实际完全不同的词，表达出来的意思就风马牛不相及了。</p><p> 原：<span word="You">You</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="dangerous">dangerous</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="moving">moving</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>.</p><p> 改：<span word="You">You</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="danger">danger</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="moving">moving</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>.</p><p> 评：<span word="dangerous">dangerous</span>表示所修饰的对象是带来危险的，有危险性的，而<span word="be">be</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="danger">danger</span>才是身处险境的意思。到底谁才是威胁呢?</p><p> 原：<span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>, <span word="providing">providing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="utilize">utilize</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="class">class</span>, <span word="might">might</span> <span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="development">development</span>.</p><p> 改：<span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>, <span word="providing">providing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="utilize">utilize</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="class">class</span>, <span word="might">might</span> <span word="affect">affect</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="development">development</span>.</p>
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