托福写作范文：伦勃朗的油画 (满分范文)
<p> 托福写作主要考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握，以及逻辑和结构构架能力，一篇好的托福写作范文能够帮助同学们抓住托福写作的得分点，并能给大家提供提供高分词汇和句式。下面，我们就来看一篇托福写作范文：伦勃朗的油画。</p><p> <span word="TPO">TPO</span>-3 <span word="integrated">integrated</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="sample">sample</span> <span word="answer">answer</span> (满分范文)</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="lecture">lecture</span> <span word="revises">revises</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="text">text</span>, <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Rembrandt">Rembrandt</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="artist">artist</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="painted">painted</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="painting">painting</span> <span word="Portrait">Portrait</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="Elderly">Elderly</span> <span word="Woman">Woman</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="White">White</span> <span word="Bonnet">Bonnet</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="inconsistency">inconsistency</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="white">white</span> <span word="cap">cap</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="identifies">identifies</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="woman">woman</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="servant">servant</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="expensive">expensive</span> <span word="fur">fur</span> <span word="collar">collar</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="wears">wears</span> <span word="dissolves">dissolves</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Professor">Professor</span> <span word="explains">explains</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fur">fur</span> <span word="collar">collar</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="apparently">apparently</span> <span word="painted">painted</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="original">original</span> <span word="painting">painting</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="worth">worth</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="displaying">displaying</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="aristocratic">aristocratic</span> <span word="woman">woman</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="light">light</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="shadow">shadow</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="painting">painting</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="fit">fit</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="refuted">refuted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="original">original</span> <span word="painting">painting</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="woman">woman</span> <span word="wears">wears</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="light">light</span> <span word="cloth">cloth</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="illuminated">illuminated</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="face">face</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="presentation">presentation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="light">light</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="shadow">shadow</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="indeed">indeed</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="realistic">realistic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="accurate">accurate</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="characteristic">characteristic</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Rembrandts">Rembrandts</span> <span word="paintings">paintings</span>.</p><p> <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mystery">mystery</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="panel">panel</span> <span word="consisting">consisting</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="patches">patches</span> <span word="glued">glued</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="solved">solved</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lecture">lecture</span>. <span word="Actually">Actually</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wood">wood</span> <span word="panel">panel</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="later">later</span> <span word="enlarged">enlarged</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="grand">grand</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="valuable">valuable</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="original">original</span> <span word="painting">painting</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="painted">painted</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="single">single</span> <span word="panel">panel</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="Rembrandt">Rembrandt</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="done">done</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wood">wood</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="tree">tree</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="Rembrandt">Rembrandt</span> <span word="paintings">paintings</span>, <span word="like">like</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Self">Self</span>-<span word="Portrait">Portrait</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Hat">Hat</span>.</p>
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