总结：考生在新托福写作中常犯的不一致性错误
<p> 考生在托福写作中经常会犯一些不一致的错误，这些小错误使考生们的托福写作分数急转直下。为大家总结了托福写作中容易不一致的错误供大家参考。</p><p> 1、主谓不一致</p><p> 例. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="money">money</span> ,<span word="he">he</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span>. (人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么。)</p><p> 剖析：<span word="one">one</span>是单数第三人称，因而本句的<span word="have">have</span>应改为<span word="has">has</span>；同理，<span word="want">want</span>应改为<span word="wants">wants</span>。本句是典型的主谓不一致。</p><p> 改为：<span word="Once">Once</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="money">money</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="wants">wants</span> (<span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span>).</p><p> 2、词性不一致</p><p> 词性不一致常表现为：介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。</p><p> 例. <span word="None">None</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span>.</p><p> 剖析：<span word="negative">negative</span> 系形容词，误作动词。</p><p> 改为：<span word="None">None</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="deny">deny</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span>.</p><p> 3，句子前后不一致</p><p> 托福写作中的句子前后不一致是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通，这也是考生常犯的毛病。</p><p> 例. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="fresh">fresh</span> <span word="water">water</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="earth">earth</span>.</p><p> 剖析：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="fresh">fresh</span> <span word="water">water</span> 与逗号后的<span word="it">it</span> 不连贯。<span word="It">It</span> 与<span word="things">things</span> 在数方面不一致。</p><p> 改为：<span word="Fresh">Fresh</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>.</p>
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