高分必备：托福写作中的得分点
<p> 对于考试的目的托福考试官方指南(以下简称指南)中明确的定义：<span word="This">This</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="gives">gives</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="demonstrate">demonstrate</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="communicate">communicate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="listened">listened</span> <span word="to">to</span>.综合分析考试模式和指南中的考核目的后，我们发现综合作文主要有以下两方面考点，一是综合作文首先考察的是考生在相对紧张和苛刻的条件下是否有能力把握文字和听力材料所表述的内容，并对两者有正确的判断，也即是<span word="the">the</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="listened">listened</span> <span word="to">to</span>;而另一个考核点则是考生能够将所获得的信息用准确和具有逻辑性的书面语言表达出来，也即是<span word="your">your</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="cancommunicate">cancommunicate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>.所以综合以上两点考核的目标，那么我们所谓的把握综合写作的得分点，重心自然就落在这两个任务的<span word="achievement">achievement</span>上。</p><p> 一、文章内容和结构的得分点</p><p> 1、清晰工整的文章结构</p><p> 在指南中明确提到，出题方希望考生能够在开始作文前，重读阅读文章并通过和听力笔记的对比，完成一份简单的提纲性材料。(<span word="Before">Before</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>, <span word="briefly">briefly</span> <span word="reread">reread</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="passage">passage</span>, <span word="consult">consult</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="notes">notes</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="brief">brief</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="points">points</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span>.)因此，我们很清楚的能够看出，出题方对于考生提出的第一个最基本的要求是希望考生能够给出的是一篇结构清晰和合理的作文，而这一点在之后的范文分析上能够更清楚的得到肯定，在指南所给出的五分范文的评价中，很明确的表示了对于工整和清晰的文章结构的赞赏，(<span word="The">The</span> <span word="writer">writer</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="organized">organized</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="points">points</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="parallel">parallel</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="another">another</span>: <span word="in">in</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="supporting">supporting</span> <span word="paragraphs">paragraphs</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lecturers">lecturers</span> <span word="observation">observation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="first">first</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="explicitly">explicitly</span> <span word="connected">connected</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="theoretical">theoretical</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>.)可能会被部分考生嗤之以鼻的对仗式的八股文章结构则在考官眼中则恰恰体现了考生思路的清晰。因此，我们得出第一个综合写作的得分点即是结构清晰工整，建议考生在考前需要对于可能出现的文章结构(听读材料观点相似或相悖)作充分的练习准备，准备好属于自己的结构模板。</p>
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