实用英语写作的技巧 (第10单元)
<p>第十单元 推展段落方法之三描述法</p><p>10.1描述法</p><p>叙述讲述发生了什么事情，描述（<span word="description">description</span>）则向读者描绘某事物的样子、声音、味道等等。作者可以通过外表、行动或变化用语言描绘一个人，一个物体，一个地方或一个场面。</p><p>示范段落10－1</p><p><span word="A">A</span> <span word="tsunami">tsunami</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="wave">wave</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="series">series</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="waves">waves</span>.<span word="It">It</span> <span word="extends">extends</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="surface">surface</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sea">sea</span> <span word="floor">floor</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="moves">moves</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="entire">entire</span> <span word="vertical">vertical</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ocean">ocean</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="speeds">speeds</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ocean">ocean</span> <span word="depth">depth</span>，<span word="the">the</span> <span word="faster">faster</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tsunami">tsunami</span> <span word="travels">travels</span>.<span word="Speeds">Speeds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="to">to</span> 600 <span word="mph">mph</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="reached">reached</span>.<span word="Toward">Toward</span> <span word="land">land</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="slows">slows</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bottom">bottom</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wave">wave</span> <span word="drags">drags</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="seabed">seabed</span>；<span word="its">its</span> <span word="crest">crest</span> <span word="rises">rises</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="fifty">fifty</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="hundred">hundred</span> <span word="feet">feet</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="more">more</span>.</p><p>10.2示范段落分析</p><p>主题句：<span word="A">A</span> <span word="tsunami">tsunami</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="wave">wave</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="series">series</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="waves">waves</span>.</p><p>细节1：<span word="extention">extention</span></p><p>细节2：<span word="speed">speed</span>（<span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="used">used</span>）</p><p>细节3：<span word="height">height</span>（<span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="used">used</span>）</p><p>在上面段落中，作者用细节（包括数据）描述了海啸的宽度（<span word="extention">extention</span>）、速度（<span word="speed">speed</span>）和高度（<span word="height">height</span>），从而告诉读者海啸是什么样子。</p><p>示范段落10－2</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="kitchen">kitchen</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mess">mess</span>.<span word="Along">Along</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="left">left</span> <span word="wall">wall</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="counter">counter</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sink">sink</span> <span word="covered">covered</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="dirty">dirty</span> <span word="dishes">dishes</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="garbage">garbage</span>.<span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="wall">wall</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="washing">washing</span> <span word="machine">machine</span> <span word="groaned">groaned</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="load">load</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="filthy">filthy</span> <span word="clothes">clothes</span>.<span word="Right">Right</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="door">door</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="standing">standing</span>，<span word="on">on</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="right">right</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="cluttered">cluttered</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="newspapers">newspapers</span>，<span word="an">an</span> <span word="overturned">overturned</span> <span word="catsup">catsup</span> <span word="bottle">bottle</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wet">wet</span>，<span word="half">half</span>－<span word="eaten">eaten</span> <span word="hot">hot</span> <span word="dog">dog</span>.<span word="At">At</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="wall">wall</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="refrigerator">refrigerator</span> <span word="stood">stood</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="door">door</span> <span word="ajar">ajar</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="milk">milk</span> <span word="dripping">dripping</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="top">top</span> <span word="shelf">shelf</span>.<span word="It">It</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="messiest">messiest</span> <span word="kitchen">kitchen</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="seen">seen</span>.</p>
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