实用英语写作的技巧 (第5单元)
<p>第五单元如何写结论句</p><p>5.1结论句</p><p>第一单元曾提到，段落由三个部分组成，最后一部分就是结论句（ <span word="the">the</span> <span word="concluding">concluding</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span>）。结论句通常与主题句一样包含有段落的中心思想，然而所用措辞与主题句不同。</p><p>在示范段落 1-1，主题句是： <span word="We">We</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="cigarette">cigarette</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="dangerous">dangerous</span> <span word="habit">habit</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="causes">causes</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>.</p><p>结论句是： <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="identified">identified</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chief">chief</span> <span word="causes">causes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="death">death</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p>5.2关于写结论句的建议</p><p>1）把握主题句的关键词</p><p>例如在关于<span word="cigarette">cigarette</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span>的示范段落 1-1中，中心思想是<span word="the">the</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="cigarette">cigarette</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span>，关键词是<span word="health">health</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>。</p><p>2）总结细节，回答主题句中隐含的问题。</p><p>在上述示范段落中，隐含的问题是<span word="What">What</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="cigarette">cigarette</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span>？结论句作出的回答是 <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="identified">identified</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chief">chief</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="death">death</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p>3）用不同的措辞表达同一中心思想。</p><p>在上述段落中，主题句的关键词是<span word="health">health</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>，而在结论句中，关键词是<span word="causes">causes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="death">death</span>。</p><p>示范段落5-1</p><p><span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="neighborhood">neighborhood</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="greatly">greatly</span> <span word="changed">changed</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="visited">visited</span> <span word="there">there</span>， <span word="about">about</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="homes">homes</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="torn">torn</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="superhighway">superhighway</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="remaining">remaining</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="plastered">plastered</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="billboards">billboards</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="surrounded">surrounded</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="signs">signs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="litter">litter</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="neighborhood">neighborhood</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="dirty">dirty</span>， <span word="noisy">noisy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cars">cars</span>.</p>
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