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<p><span word="NMET">NMET</span>书面表达评分标准最高档要求：应用了较多的语法结构或词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。从历年书面表达高分文章来看，每篇文章都有亮点，即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。</p><p>要想获得高分就应在正确表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的亮点。</p><p>一、词汇选择标新立异</p><p>在写作中较高级词汇的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同（近）义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。</p><p>1）这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。</p><p><span word="A">A</span>：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="flat">flat</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Fangcao">Fangcao</span> <span word="Street">Street</span>.</p><p><span word="B">B</span>：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="flat">flat</span> <span word="situates">situates</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Fangcao">Fangcao</span> <span word="Street">Street</span>.</p><p>分析：<span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span>是常见词语，而<span word="situates">situates</span> <span word="in">in</span>则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。</p><p>2）在周末我们做很多作业。</p><p><span word="A">A</span>：<span word="At">At</span> <span word="weekends">weekends</span>，<span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="homework">homework</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span>.</p><p><span word="B">B</span>：<span word="At">At</span> <span word="weekends">weekends</span>，<span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="endless">endless</span> <span word="homework">homework</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span>.</p><p>分析：<span word="B">B</span>句在表达时没有使用过于直接的<span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span>，而是使用了<span word="endless">endless</span>.<span word="endless">endless</span>就是由《大纲》词汇<span word="end">end</span>加后缀-<span word="less">less</span>变化来的。</p><p>3）洗澡间和厨房都很好。</p>
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