推荐信范例及分析
<p>范例：</p><p><span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span>：</p><p><span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="Mr">Mr</span>. <span word="Fu">Fu</span>-<span word="ping">ping</span> <span word="Wang">Wang</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="application">application</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="Mr">Mr</span>. <span word="Wang">Wang</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="research">research</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="National">National</span> <span word="Science">Science</span> <span word="Councils">Councils</span> <span word="project">project</span> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="United">United</span> <span word="States">States</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="United">United</span> <span word="Nations">Nations</span> <span word="Financial">Financial</span> <span word="Crisis">Crisis</span>： <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Role">Role</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="U">U</span>.<span word="S">S</span>. <span word="Congress">Congress</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="September">September</span> 1997. <span word="His">His</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="responsibilities">responsibilities</span> <span word="include">include</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="collecting">collecting</span>， <span word="analyzing">analyzing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="translating">translating</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="enthusiastic">enthusiastic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="progressive">progressive</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="extremely">extremely</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="potentiality">potentiality</span>. <span word="Mr">Mr</span>. <span word="Wang">Wang</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="quick">quick</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="solving">solving</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>， <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="logical">logical</span> <span word="mind">mind</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="enables">enables</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span> <span word="analyze">analyze</span> <span word="difficulties">difficulties</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="handed">handed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="completed">completed</span> <span word="satisfactorily">satisfactorily</span>. <span word="Actually">Actually</span>， <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="reliable">reliable</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="assign">assign</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="responsibilities">responsibilities</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="help">help</span>， <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="research">research</span> <span word="paper">paper</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="fortunate">fortunate</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="capable">capable</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="diligence">diligence</span>， <span word="coupled">coupled</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="competence">competence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="pleasant">pleasant</span> <span word="personality">personality</span>， <span word="will">will</span> <span word="assure">assure</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="achievements">achievements</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="pursuits">pursuits</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="strongly">strongly</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="admission">admission</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="reservation">reservation</span>.</p><p><span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>，</p><p><span word="Chung">Chung</span> <span word="Weikuo">Weikuo</span></p><p><span word="Research">Research</span> <span word="Fellow">Fellow</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Professor">Professor</span></p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="Institute">Institute</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="European">European</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="Studies">Studies</span></p><p>分析：</p><p>您觉得这封推荐信怎样呢?</p><p>如果这是一封为秘书介绍新工作的推荐信，那还可以接受;不过对于申请研究生院来讲，就似乎不太够力度了。首先，这封推荐信犯的一个大忌就是不够明确。从信中我们只看到推荐人很努力地用了一大堆形容词，试着告诉入学评审委员，这个申请人很聪明、很热心、很有潜力、很有分析能力云云，相关的例证却付之厥如;接著，这封信又未能指出这个申请者这些特质与将来的研究领域有何相关，只说在这个申请人的帮助下，他可以专心于研究工作，言下之意似乎就是告诉对方这个申请者是个很好的秘书，而非一个有前景的研究生。</p>
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