点评作文Animals Are Our Friends
<p><span word="Now">Now</span>, <span word="lets">lets</span> <span word="imagine">imagine</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="square">square</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="grass">grass</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="pigeon">pigeon</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="sun">sun</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="shining">shining</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="happily">happily</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="pigeon">pigeon</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="flying">flying</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="girl">girl</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="lets">lets</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Australia">Australia</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="kangaroo">kangaroo</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="jumping">jumping</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="savanna">savanna</span>. <span word="Suddenly">Suddenly</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="greedy">greedy</span> <span word="hunters">hunters</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="savanna">savanna</span> <span word="shot">shot</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="kangaroo">kangaroo</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="fell">fell</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ground">ground</span> <span word="immediately">immediately</span>. <span word="How">How</span> <span word="terrible">terrible</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span>! <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="tragic">tragic</span>! <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="done">done</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="destruction">destruction</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="animals">animals</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="walk">walk</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="street">street</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="city">city</span>, <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="windows">windows</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="shops">shops</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="street">street</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="animal">animal</span> <span word="fur">fur</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="clothes">clothes</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="wear">wear</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="expand">expand</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="space">space</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="living">living</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="cut">cut</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="rain">rain</span> <span word="forests">forests</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="fertile">fertile</span> <span word="farmland">farmland</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="animals">animals</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="in">in</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="food">food</span>. <span word="Thirdly">Thirdly</span>, <span word="lets">lets</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="whats">whats</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="tables">tables</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="animals">animals</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="know">know</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="delicious">delicious</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="tragic">tragic</span> <span word="We">We</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="filling">filling</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="stomach">stomach</span>. <span word="Fourthly">Fourthly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="protecting">protecting</span> <span word="animals">animals</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="moment">moment</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="chain">chain</span> <span word="unbalanced">unbalanced</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="kill">kill</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="animals">animals</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span>! <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span> <span word="idea">idea</span>!</p><p><span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="nowadays">nowadays</span> <span word="desire">desire</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="peaceful">peaceful</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="animals">animals</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="friends">friends</span>. <span word="Having">Having</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="dream">dream</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="effort">effort</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="dream">dream</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="true">true</span>; <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="educate">educate</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="protecting">protecting</span> <span word="animals">animals</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="animals">animals</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="idea">idea</span>; <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="controls">controls</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="action">action</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="kill">kill</span> <span word="animals">animals</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="middle">middle</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="students">students</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="Let">Let</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="attitude">attitude</span> <span word="towards">towards</span> <span word="protecting">protecting</span> <span word="animals">animals</span>. <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="square">square</span> <span word="mentioned">mentioned</span> <span word="above">above</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="grown">grown</span>-<span word="ups">ups</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="there">there</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="lovely">lovely</span> <span word="pigeons">pigeons</span> <span word="flying">flying</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="Oh">Oh</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="that">that</span>!</p>
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