段落展开法I
<p>1.段落的设计</p><p>段落需要事先设计好。首先要定下一个主题或一个中心意思，并用一句话表达出来(即主题句);其次，选择有助于阐述这一中心意思的例子或细节，把它们一一列出;最后，把这些细节按逻辑顺序排好，一个段落的初稿就这样设计出来了。</p><p>初学者最好先写一个提纲。比方说，要写一个关于集邮的段落，可以先写下这样一个中心句子：集邮是一个很有意思的业余爱好，然后列出下面几点：</p><p>(1)邮票上印有美丽的图案;</p><p>(2)邮票上印有历史人物的横行;</p><p>(3)每当收集到过去未见过的邮票时，我总是格外高兴;</p><p>(4)从收集的邮票里，我能学到不少知识。</p><p>当你重读以上写好的四点提纲时，也许会发现最后一点还是放在前面更合适。按照这个提纲，你可以写出下面的段落：</p><p><span word="Philately">Philately</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="interesting">interesting</span> <span word="hobby">hobby</span>. <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="open">open</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="albums">albums</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stamps">stamps</span> <span word="Ive">Ive</span> <span word="collected">collected</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="new">new</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="printed">printed</span> <span word="drawings">drawings</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="rare">rare</span> <span word="birds">birds</span>, <span word="animals">animals</span>, <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="flowers">flowers</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="magnifying">magnifying</span> <span word="glass">glass</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="nature">nature</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="stamps">stamps</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="portraits">portraits</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="historical">historical</span> <span word="figures">figures</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="Qu">Qu</span> <span word="Yuan">Yuan</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Dr">Dr</span>. <span word="Sun">Sun</span> <span word="Yatsen">Yatsen</span>, <span word="George">George</span> <span word="Washington">Washington</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Chester">Chester</span> <span word="W">W</span>. <span word="Nimits">Nimits</span>. <span word="Whenever">Whenever</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="unfamiliar">unfamiliar</span> <span word="name">name</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="consulting">consulting</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="encyclopedia">encyclopedia</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="another">another</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="relatives">relatives</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="stamps">stamps</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="envelopes">envelopes</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="stamp">stamp</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="havent">havent</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="yet">yet</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="ask">ask</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="oblige">oblige</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="delight">delight</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="add">add</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="stamp">stamp</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="collection">collection</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="stamps">stamps</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="philately">philately</span>.</p>
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