英语写作好的句子1
<p>1.完整</p><p>完整是好句子的第一要点。一个完整的句子表达单一的完整的思想，它不包含并不紧密相关的意思，也不表达本身不完整的思想。</p><p><span word="Faulty">Faulty</span>: <span word="Du">Du</span> <span word="Fu">Fu</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="greatest">greatest</span> <span word="poets">poets</span>.</p><p><span word="Revised">Revised</span>: <span word="Du">Du</span> <span word="Fu">Fu</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="greatest">greatest</span> <span word="poets">poets</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Tang">Tang</span> <span word="Period">Period</span>.</p><p>第一句话有毛病，因为所表达的思想并不完整：时代和国家都没有提到。</p><p>加了<span word="the">the</span> <span word="Tang">Tang</span> <span word="Period">Period</span>句子的意思就清楚了：我们都知道唐是中国历史上的一个朝代。</p><p>2.连贯</p><p>连贯是指句子各部分之间清楚而合理的联系。句子中的词语和部分应恰当地衔接，它们之间的关系应十分清楚。不连贯的句子通常有以下几种毛病：平行结构有缺点，代词指代不清楚，修饰语和被修饰语的关系不明确，在人称、数、语态、时态或语气上有混乱之处。</p><p><span word="Faulty">Faulty</span>: <span word="A">A</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="judged">judged</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="says">says</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="deeds">deeds</span>.</p><p><span word="Revised">Revised</span>: <span word="A">A</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="judged">judged</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="says">says</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="does">does</span>.</p><p><span word="A">A</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="judged">judged</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="words">words</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="deeds">deeds</span>.</p><p>平行的意思最好用平行的结构来表达。此句中的<span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="says">says</span>与<span word="his">his</span> <span word="deeds">deeds</span>在形式上不平行，所以应改动其中之一。</p><p><span word="Faulty">Faulty</span>: <span word="To">To</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="ready">ready</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trip">trip</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="suitcase">suitcase</span>.</p>
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