写好英语段落三个标准
<p>首先，一个段落必须有一个中心即主题思想，该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必须紧扣这个主题(<span word="stick">stick</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span>)，这就是段落的统一性(<span word="unity">unity</span>)。其次，一个段落必须有若干推展句，使主题思想得到充分展开，从而给读者一个完整的感觉，这就是完整性(<span word="completeness">completeness</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="adequateness">adequateness</span>)。再者，一个段落不是杂乱无章的，而是有机的组合，句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑，从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅(<span word="smooth">smooth</span>)，这就是连贯性(<span word="coherence">coherence</span>)。下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。</p><p>1、统一性</p><p>一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。请看下例：</p><p><span word="Joe">Joe</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="decided">decided</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="trip">trip</span> <span word="wed">wed</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="buying">buying</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="camper">camper</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="stocking">stocking</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="necessities">necessities</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Bella">Bella</span> <span word="bakes">bakes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="rhubarb">rhubarb</span> <span word="pie">pie</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="started">started</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="spring">spring</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Minneapolis">Minneapolis</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="headed">headed</span> <span word="west">west</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="northern">northern</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="enjoyed">enjoyed</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="met">met</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trailer">trailer</span> <span word="park">park</span>. <span word="Joe">Joe</span> <span word="received">received</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="retirement">retirement</span> <span word="dinner">dinner</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="surprise">surprise</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="liked">liked</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="southern">southern</span> <span word="regions">regions</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="decided">decided</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stay">stay</span> <span word="here">here</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="New">New</span> <span word="Mexico">Mexico</span>.</p><p>本段的主题句是段首句，<span word="controlling">controlling</span> <span word="idea">idea</span>(中心思想)是<span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="trip">trip</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span>。文中出现两个<span word="irrelevant">irrelevant</span> <span word="sentences">sentences</span>，一个是<span word="Bella">Bella</span> <span word="bakes">bakes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="rhubarb">rhubarb</span> <span word="pie">pie</span>，这一段是讲的是<span word="Joe">Joe</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> ，中间出现一个<span word="Bella">Bella</span>是不合适的。还有，<span word="Joe">Joe</span> <span word="received">received</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="retirement">retirement</span> <span word="dinner">dinner</span>这一句更是与主题句不相关。考生在四级统考的作文卷上常常因为造出<span word="irrelevant">irrelevant</span> <span word="sentences">sentences</span>(不相关语句)而丢分，值得引起注意。再看一个例子：</p>
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