学术文章写作的注意要点（四）
<p>例如：<span word="Things">Things</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span>, <span word="known">known</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="history">history</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="treasure">treasure</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span>, <span word="through">through</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="valuable">valuable</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="serves">serves</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="guiding">guiding</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p>例子中作者用了3处逗号，而事实上，从句间关系并非密不可分。我们可以很轻松的分成三句话，作者写得安心，读者读得舒心，做到真正的言必达意。</p><p><span word="History">History</span> <span word="consists">consists</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="treasure">treasure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span>. <span word="Through">Through</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="thoroughly">thoroughly</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="valuable">valuable</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="history">history</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="historical">historical</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="serves">serves</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="guidance">guidance</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p>5、避免陈词滥调等废话</p><p>例如：<span word="For">For</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="satisfying">satisfying</span> <span word="score">score</span>, <span word="students">students</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prepare">prepare</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="review">review</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="texts">texts</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span>, <span word="remember">remember</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="deep">deep</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>, <span word="enlarge">enlarge</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="examinations">examinations</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="coming">coming</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="aims">aims</span> <span word="are">are</span>, <span word="will">will</span> <span word="surely">surely</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="corresponding">corresponding</span> <span word="paying">paying</span> <span word="back">back</span>.</p><p>段中的这一句<span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="aims">aims</span> <span word="are">are</span>，在整个上下文表达上面没有任何实质性的意义，完完全全是句废话。</p>
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