英语写作中常见错误与分析（三）
<p>七。措词毛病(<span word="Troubles">Troubles</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Diction">Diction</span>)</p><p><span word="Diction">Diction</span> 是指在特定句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的推敲、斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。</p><p>病句：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="chemical">chemical</span> <span word="obstacles">obstacles</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="agriculture">agriculture</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="pollution">pollution</span>.</p><p>(农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。)</p><p>剖析：显然，考生把<span word="obstacles">obstacles</span>障碍、障碍物误作<span word="substance">substance</span>物质了。另外<span word="the">the</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="use">use</span>(使用的不断增加)应改为<span word="abusive">abusive</span> <span word="use">use</span>(滥用)。</p><p>改为：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="abusive">abusive</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="chemical">chemical</span> <span word="substances">substances</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="agriculture">agriculture</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="causes">causes</span>/<span word="leads">leads</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pollution">pollution</span>.</p><p>八。累赘(<span word="Redundancy">Redundancy</span>)</p><p>言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。</p><p>病句1：<span word="In">In</span> <span word="spite">spite</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="lazy">lazy</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="him">him</span>.</p><p>剖析：本句的<span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="lazy">lazy</span>系同谓语从句，我们按照上述能用词组的不用从句。</p><p>改为：<span word="In">In</span> <span word="spite">spite</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="laziness">laziness</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="him">him</span>.</p><p>病句2：<span word="For">For</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="diligent">diligent</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="kind">kind</span>, <span word="money">money</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="need">need</span>.</p>
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