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英语写作的基本要求(二)

<p>3、连贯性(<span word="coherence">coherence</span>)</p><p>连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面,前者指的是内在的逻辑性,后者指的是使用转换词语。当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连,句子之间就没有内在的有机的联系;反之,只有意连而没有形连,有时行文就不够流畅。</p><p>1)、意连</p><p>段落中句子的排列应遵循一定的次序,不能想到什么就写什么。如果在下笔之前没有构思,边写边想,写写停停,那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。</p><p><span word="A">A</span>.按时间先后排列(<span word="chronological">chronological</span> <span word="arrangement">arrangement</span>)</p><p><span word="We">We</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="close">close</span> <span word="calls">calls</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="day">day</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="rose">rose</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="obviously">obviously</span> <span word="late">late</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hurry">hurry</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="miss">miss</span> <span word="breakfast">breakfast</span>; <span word="we">we</span> <span word="knew">knew</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="dining">dining</span> <span word="room">room</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="strict">strict</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="closing">closing</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="nine">nine</span> <span word="oclock">oclock</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="desert">desert</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="hours">hours</span><span word="it">it</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="close">close</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="noon">noon</span><span word="the">the</span> <span word="heat">heat</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="hid">hid</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="in">in</span>; <span word="the">the</span> <span word="radiator">radiator</span> <span word="boiled">boiled</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="drinking">drinking</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cool">cool</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="down">down</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="reached">reached</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mountain">mountain</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="oclock">oclock</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="exhausted">exhausted</span>. <span word="Here">Here</span>, <span word="judgement">judgement</span> <span word="ran">ran</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="started">started</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tough">tough</span> <span word="climb">climb</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="summit">summit</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="realizing">realizing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="darkness">darkness</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="suddenly">suddenly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="desert">desert</span>. <span word="Sure">Sure</span> <span word="enough">enough</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="struggling">struggling</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Andrew">Andrew</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="steep">steep</span> <span word="cliff">cliff</span>, <span word="dragging">dragging</span> <span word="Mohammed">Mohammed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="along">along</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="him">him</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="nine">nine</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wind">wind</span> <span word="howled">howled</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="flat">flat</span> <span word="ledge">ledge</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="summit">summit</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="knew">knew</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="shivered">shivered</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="warmth">warmth</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="lucky">lucky</span> <span word="day">day</span>.</p>
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