英语写作的基本要求（三）
<p>4、有损连贯性的几种情况：</p><p>考生在写作中经常出现下面几种错误：</p><p>1、不必要的改变时态，比如：</p><p><span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="movie">movie</span>, <span word="Robert">Robert</span> <span word="Redford">Redford</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="spy">spy</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="everybody">everybody</span> <span word="dead">dead</span>. <span word="Other">Other</span> <span word="spies">spies</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="kill">kill</span> <span word="him">him</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="takes">takes</span> <span word="refuge">refuge</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Julie">Julie</span> <span word="Christie">Christie</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="house">house</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="waited">waited</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="heat">heat</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="die">die</span> <span word="down">down</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="anyway">anyway</span>.</p><p>2、不必要的改变单复数，比如：</p><p><span word="Everybody">Everybody</span> <span word="looks">looks</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="satisfaction">satisfaction</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="happy">happy</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="seeks">seeks</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="run">run</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="run">run</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="catch">catch</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="him">him</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pursue">pursue</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deeper">deeper</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="satisfaction">satisfaction</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="relationships">relationships</span>.</p><p>3、不必要的改变人称，比如：</p><p><span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="ever">ever</span>, <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="touch">touch</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="childrens">childrens</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tendency">tendency</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="cleavages">cleavages</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="family">family</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="arrange">arrange</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="another">another</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="isolated">isolated</span> <span word="pleasures">pleasures</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="obligations">obligations</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="sponsor">sponsor</span> <span word="togetherness">togetherness</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="therefore">therefore</span> <span word="sponsor">sponsor</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>.</p><p>因此写作中，一定要注意时态，人称以及数的变化是否正确，要注意保持一致。</p>
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