学术文章写作的注意要点（三）
<p>3、尽量避免重复使用单词或者词组。特别是近距离集中在某一两句话里使用。</p><p>例如：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="culture">culture</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="distinctly">distinctly</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="culture">culture</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span>.</p><p>这一个开头，总共两行字，却连续出现了4个<span word="One">One</span>，3个<span word="culture">culture</span>。如果你把这段话大声朗读一下，就会觉得别扭、好笑了。连续使用相同的单词或者词组(包括短句)，体现的是作者词汇量匮乏，写作风格较差，遣词造句能力不强。给读者的感觉就是昏昏欲睡。</p><p>很容易的我们就可以改正：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="distinctly">distinctly</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="helps">helps</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="own">own</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span>.</p><p>这句话把原来的三句分句合成了并无冗长感觉的一句。精简的同时，也恰当地避免了重复多次使用<span word="culture">culture</span>，<span word="one">one</span>的问题。用了<span word="this">this</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span>，也避免了在近距离使用两个<span word="author">author</span>。</p><p>4、避免使用从句套从句的超长句子。</p><p>学术性的文章，应当避免追求华丽词藻和句型。作为非母语者，我们在语感上面已经处于劣势。为了避免缺乏语感而造成的很多语法上面、句子结构上面的小失误，我们更应该尽量避免使用长句。看了很多作者的文章，长句造成的后果通常有：单复数混淆，<span word="it">it</span>、<span word="that">that</span>指代不清，从句两头时态不符，连接介词错误，等等。</p>
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