三篇短文与一个老外的评语（一）
<p>第一篇： <span word="Oops">Oops</span>, <span word="think">think</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="forgot">forgot</span></p><p><span word="There">There</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="reputation">reputation</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="brother">brother</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span>, <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="there">there</span>. <span word="Up">Up</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="done">done</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="impression">impression</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="passed">passed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="barrier">barrier</span>? <span word="interview">interview</span>? <span word="he">he</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="lucky">lucky</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="dream">dream</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="true">true</span>.</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="bike">bike</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="gloves">gloves</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cold">cold</span> <span word="weather">weather</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="entering">entering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="office">office</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="drew">drew</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="gloves">gloves</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="table">table</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="began">began</span>.</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="asked">asked</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="questions">questions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="answered">answered</span> <span word="smoothly">smoothly</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="satisfied">satisfied</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="done">done</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hall">hall</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="delight">delight</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="home">home</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="cold">cold</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="realized">realized</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="left">left</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="gloves">gloves</span> <span word="behind">behind</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="hurried">hurried</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="them">them</span>.</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="day">day</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="spokeswoman">spokeswoman</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="gloves">gloves</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="forgotten">forgotten</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="enough">enough</span>, <span word="said">said</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="spokeswoman">spokeswoman</span>.</p><p><span word="By">By</span> <span word="Yu">Yu</span> <span word="Erlong">Erlong</span>, <span word="Shanxi">Shanxi</span></p>
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