三篇短文及一个老外的评语（四）
<p>以下是一位老外的评语：</p><p><span word="What">What</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="out">out</span></p><p><span word="WHEN">WHEN</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="reads">reads</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="essays">essays</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="blur">blur</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="piece">piece</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="crowd">crowd</span>; <span word="something">something</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="special">special</span>.</p><p><span word="Unless">Unless</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="numerous">numerous</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="understanding">understanding</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="usually">usually</span> <span word="ignore">ignore</span> <span word="spelling">spelling</span> <span word="mistakes">mistakes</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="grammatical">grammatical</span> <span word="errors">errors</span>, <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="edited">edited</span> <span word="out">out</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="writer">writer</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="material">material</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="structure">structure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="expressed">expressed</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="accurate">accurate</span>, <span word="sensitive">sensitive</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="appropriate">appropriate</span> <span word="observations">observations</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p><span word="Let">Let</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="essays">essays</span> <span word="published">published</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="week">week</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="job">job</span>-<span word="hunting">hunting</span>? <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tough">tough</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="cruel">cruel</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="essays">essays</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="happens">happens</span>, <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="stories">stories</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="failure">failure</span>, <span word="though">though</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="ways">ways</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="me">me</span>？</p>
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