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<p>一、用介词短语替代从句</p><p>例：</p><p>原句：<span word="While">While</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="tennis">tennis</span>， <span word="she">she</span> <span word="started">started</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="lasted">lasted</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="morning">morning</span>.</p><p>修改后：<span word="During">During</span> <span word="tennis">tennis</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="started">started</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="lasted">lasted</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="morning">morning</span>.</p><p>原句：<span word="When">When</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="light">light</span>， <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="right">right</span>.</p><p>修改后：<span word="At">At</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="light">light</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="left">left</span>.</p><p>二、删除诸如<span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span>或<span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span>之类的关系代词，变从句为短语</p><p>例：</p><p>句：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="novel">novel</span>， <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="parts">parts</span>， <span word="told">told</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="story">story</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Middle">Middle</span> <span word="Ages">Ages</span>.</p><p>修改后：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="three">three</span>-<span word="part">part</span> <span word="novel">novel</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="story">story</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Middle">Middle</span> <span word="Ages">Ages</span>.</p><p>注：把句中的<span word="three">three</span> <span word="parts">parts</span>改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词<span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="in">in</span>。我们经常可以将关系代词如<span word="that">that</span>去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。</p><p>三、剔除你不需要的单词</p><p>例：</p><p><span word="Two">Two</span> <span word="joint">joint</span> <span word="partners">partners</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span>-<span word="distance">distance</span> <span word="telephone">telephone</span> <span word="call">call</span>.</p><p>写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词<span word="joint">joint</span>和<span word="telephone">telephone</span>，注意删去不必要的词。</p>
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