2013年2月16日雅思写作A类大作文回顾
<p> 作文题目：</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="lawbreakers">lawbreakers</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prison">prison</span>, <span word="others">others</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="alternatives">alternatives</span>, (<span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="being">being</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="beneficial">beneficial</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="community">community</span>). <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>.</p><p> 一些人认为所有的罪犯都应该送进监狱，而其他人却认为还有其他好的方式代替入狱惩罚。请就两个观点进行讨论，并提出自己的观点。</p><p> 题型类别:表立场观点类</p><p> 考题难度：同2012.05.12</p><p> 犯罪率传统经典题目</p><p> 写作解析：</p><p> 监狱的功能：1威慑潜在犯罪者；2让犯罪者付出代价；3平衡受害者心理</p><p> 监狱的缺陷：费纳税人钱</p><p> 惩罚犯人的方式：1道德教育比如读圣经；2就业技能培训，帮助犯人重拾生活信心与能力；3减少歧视避免二次犯罪</p><p> 犯罪的原因归纳：1减少贫富差距与贫困人口；2提供免费<span word="primary">primary</span><span word="secondary">secondary</span> <span word="education">education</span>；3社会陷阱与不良信息；4家庭教育</p><p> 写作指导：</p><p> 首段，赞同题目观点；</p><p> 第二段，罪犯在监狱里什么都不做是花着纳税人的钱的；</p><p> 第三段，没有接受教育和不幸的家庭是原因，要教育，要给他们机会；</p>
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