2013年7月27日雅思写作的范文
<p> 小作文：两个线图，第一个<span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="train">train</span> <span word="passengers">passengers</span> <span word="from">from</span> 2000 <span word="to">to</span> 2009. 第二个<span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="running">running</span> <span word="train">train</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="target">target</span> <span word="from">from</span> 2000 <span word="to">to</span> 2009.</p><p> 答题要点：动态图重点写趋势;结论写两个图的联系。</p><p> 大作文：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="restoration">restoration</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="spends">spends</span> <span word="numerous">numerous</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="expenditures">expenditures</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="housing">housing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="development">development</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>?</p><p> <span word="During">During</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="urbanization">urbanization</span>, <span word="governments">governments</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="attitudes">attitudes</span> <span word="towards">towards</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="historic">historic</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="China">China</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="quantity">quantity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="fashioned">fashioned</span> <span word="houses">houses</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sites">sites</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="siheyuan">siheyuan</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ancient">ancient</span> <span word="rampart">rampart</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="demolished">demolished</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="rises">rises</span>. (被动句)</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="course">course</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="glamorous">glamorous</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="functionbetter">functionbetter</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="ones">ones</span>. <span word="Modern">Modern</span> <span word="architectural">architectural</span> <span word="techniques">techniques</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="spatial">spatial</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="material">material</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="attempt">attempt</span> <span word="toaccommodate">toaccommodate</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="crowded">crowded</span> <span word="metropolis">metropolis</span>. <span word="Meanwhile">Meanwhile</span> <span word="substantial">substantial</span> <span word="infrastructures">infrastructures</span> <span word="including">including</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="roads">roads</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fast">fast</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="ofinter">ofinter</span>-<span word="province">province</span> <span word="trade">trade</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="business">business</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="factor">factor</span> <span word="regarding">regarding</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>. <span word="Constructing">Constructing</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="consumes">consumes</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="materials">materials</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="canboost">canboost</span> <span word="related">related</span> <span word="industries">industries</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="steel">steel</span>, <span word="iron">iron</span>, <span word="lumber">lumber</span>, <span word="cement">cement</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="forth">forth</span>. (比较级，非谓语，<span word="there">there</span> <span word="be">be</span>句型，动名词做主语，定语从句)</p>
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