2012年10月20日雅思考试写作的范文
<p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="easier">easier</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="effect">effect</span>?</p><p> 参考范文：</p><p> <span word="Never">Never</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="travelling">travelling</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="alien">alien</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="century">century</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="partially">partially</span> <span word="attributed">attributed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cheap">cheap</span> <span word="flight">flight</span> <span word="tickets">tickets</span>. <span word="Facing">Facing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="frenzy">frenzy</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="whilst">whilst</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="insist">insist</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="supported">supported</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="maintained">maintained</span>.</p><p> <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>, <span word="cross">cross</span>-<span word="border">border</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="downsides">downsides</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="one">one</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="carbon">carbon</span> <span word="dioxide">dioxide</span> <span word="planes">planes</span> <span word="emitted">emitted</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="disproportionately">disproportionately</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="emitted">emitted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="transportation">transportation</span> <span word="means">means</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="carbon">carbon</span> <span word="dioxide">dioxide</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ozone">ozone</span> <span word="layer">layer</span> <span word="thinning">thinning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="probability">probability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="contracting">contracting</span> <span word="skin">skin</span> <span word="cancer">cancer</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="being">being</span> <span word="easier">easier</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="criminals">criminals</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="flee">flee</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="committing">committing</span> <span word="hideous">hideous</span> <span word="crime">crime</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="pose">pose</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="threat">threat</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="security">security</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="stability">stability</span>.</p><p> <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="downsides">downsides</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="overshadow">overshadow</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="upsides">upsides</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="starters">starters</span>, <span word="travelling">travelling</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="ease">ease</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="expand">expand</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="horizons">horizons</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="stimulate">stimulate</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="productive">productive</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="markets">markets</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="conveniently">conveniently</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="locate">locate</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="target">target</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sell">sell</span> <span word="goods">goods</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="competitively">competitively</span> <span word="enough">enough</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="flourish">flourish</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span>, <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="operating">operating</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="stable">stable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="harmonies">harmonies</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="afforded">afforded</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="misunderstanding">misunderstanding</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="respect">respect</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="diverse">diverse</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="harmonious">harmonious</span> <span word="culture">culture</span>.</p>
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