名师范文：2012年04月12日雅思写作的范文
<p> 题目：<span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="life">life</span> ? <span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="ambition">ambition</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="characteristic">characteristic</span>?</p><p> </p><p> 点评：这是一个纯说理的题目，有些抽象，不像有些具体话题那么容易写。素材和论据可以《剑5-3》关于竞争与合作的题目。个别班上曾经讲过《剑5-3》。其实去年3月12号就考过一次竞争的利弊，但是这一次把<span word="competition">competition</span>变成了<span word="ambition">ambition</span>，这一下把旧题变成了新题。换了个马甲，你还能认出来么？其实写<span word="ambition">ambition</span>和写<span word="competition">competition</span>是差不太多的。</p><p> </p><p> 写作是一个文字游戏，需要用到大量的相关词汇。题目是<span word="ambition">ambition</span>，马上要想到相关的词汇，比如<span word="ambitious">ambitious</span>，比如<span word="aspire">aspire</span>， <span word="aspiration">aspiration</span>， <span word="goal">goal</span>， <span word="objective">objective</span>， <span word="desire">desire</span>，<span word="eager">eager</span>，<span word="achieve">achieve</span>， <span word="achievement">achievement</span>，<span word="successful">successful</span>，<span word="realize">realize</span>等等。这样写起来就不会感觉没有词了。</p><p> </p><p> 其实这个题目的弊端更好写一些，因为3月8号刚刚考过一次工作与生活的平衡，那里面的一些论据也可以搬过来。</p><p> </p>
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