2012年5月12日雅思的范文：监狱教育
<p> <span word="Today">Today</span> <span word="prison">prison</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="solution">solution</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="crime">crime</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="criminals">criminals</span>. <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>?</p><p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="first">first</span>, <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sending">sending</span> <span word="criminals">criminals</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prison">prison</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="effective">effective</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="way">way</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="Stop">Stop</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="moment">moment</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="safeguarding">safeguarding</span> <span word="innocent">innocent</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="incorrigible">incorrigible</span> <span word="violent">violent</span> <span word="sex">sex</span> <span word="offenders">offenders</span>, <span word="trigger">trigger</span>-<span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="drug">drug</span> <span word="dealers">dealers</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cold">cold</span>-<span word="blooded">blooded</span> <span word="murderers">murderers</span>. <span word="Education">Education</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="crimes">crimes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="extent">extent</span>; <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="doubtful">doubtful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="crime">crime</span>-<span word="free">free</span>.</p><p> <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="inmates">inmates</span> <span word="eventually">eventually</span> <span word="return">return</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="community">community</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="trade">trade</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decent">decent</span> <span word="living">living</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="believed">believed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="changing">changing</span> <span word="criminal">criminal</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span>. <span word="Nevertheless">Nevertheless</span>, <span word="most">most</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="story">story</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="productive">productive</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="skilled">skilled</span> <span word="criminals">criminals</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="rehabilitation">rehabilitation</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span>; <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="criminals">criminals</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="prison">prison</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="cases">cases</span>, <span word="after">after</span> <span word="serving">serving</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="commiting">commiting</span> <span word="offences">offences</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="sophisticated">sophisticated</span> <span word="kind">kind</span>.</p><p> <span word="Education">Education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="romantic">romantic</span> <span word="option">option</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="solution">solution</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="crime">crime</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="point">point</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="correctional">correctional</span> <span word="facilities">facilities</span>, <span word="considering">considering</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="inmates">inmates</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="under">under</span>-<span word="educated">educated</span>. <span word="Rather">Rather</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="policy">policy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="strictly">strictly</span> <span word="supervise">supervise</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="released">released</span> <span word="prisoners">prisoners</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="observe">observe</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="happen">happen</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="Here">Here</span>, <span word="skeptics">skeptics</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="cases">cases</span>, <span word="prison">prison</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="produces">produces</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="better">better</span>-<span word="educated">educated</span> <span word="criminals">criminals</span>, <span word="only">only</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="dangerous">dangerous</span>. <span word="That">That</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="violent">violent</span> <span word="crime">crime</span> <span word="wave">wave</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="raging">raging</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="prisons">prisons</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="over">over</span>-<span word="crowded">crowded</span> <span word="certainly">certainly</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="reflect">reflect</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="recidivism">recidivism</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="merely">merely</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="impotence">impotence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="innocent">innocent</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="community">community</span>.</p>
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