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2012年3月31日雅思写作的回忆

<p>  <span word="Task">Task</span> 1 <span word="Line">Line</span> <span word="Graph">Graph</span> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="graph">graph</span> <span word="below">below</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="childrens">childrens</span> <span word="books">books</span>, <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="adult">adult</span> <span word="fiction">fiction</span> <span word="from">from</span> 2002 <span word="to">to</span> 2006 <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="European">European</span> <span word="country">country</span>.    点评:这篇小作文为三线,在线状图中三线中主要考察的是学生对于上升、下降的趋势描写,考生在应对此类题型的时候应该注意对于表达的多样性替换。如遇到四线或者五线,请注意相同趋势线的描述。    <span word="Task">Task</span> 2: <span word="Argumentative">Argumentative</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="considered">considered</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="value">value</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="youth">youth</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="important">important</span>. <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>.    点评:这篇作文属于双边式议论文,文章的主题是老龄化与年轻人教育。其实大家仔细观察会发现这个题目属于<span word="Ageing">Ageing</span> <span word="Problem">Problem</span> 的套系,属于<span word="retirement">retirement</span> <span word="age">age</span>利弊分析的同源题,其中老人的价值相当于延迟退休,而年轻人的价值可以对应到提早退休。</p><p>  </p>
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