2009年10月8日雅思写作真题的点评
<p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="childrens">childrens</span> <span word="development">development</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bigger">bigger</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="childrens">childrens</span> <span word="life">life</span></p><p> </p><p> <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>?</p><p> </p><p> 本题属于教育类话题，是雅思考试中历年考查频率最高的话题。而如果对雅思作文题目有深入学习的同学都应该知道，本题其实与08年9月6日的作文题有异曲同工之妙</p><p> </p><p> <span word="Once">Once</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="intellectual">intellectual</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>?考试大论坛</p><p> </p><p> （一旦孩子开始上学，老师对他们的智力和社交的发展比家长有更多的影响。你在何种程度上同意或者反对？）</p><p> </p><p> 受上面题目的启发，本文宜按照折中法写作。下面是笔者对本题的分析</p><p> </p><p> 在孩子上学之前父母的影响更大</p><p> </p><p> 1、由于还在主要时间和父母在一起，所以父母对孩子的道德行为影响很大。一个善良、正直（<span word="good">good</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="honest">honest</span>）的父母教出来的孩子往往也具备这些良好的品质（<span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="quality">quality</span>），最终能够取得成功。举例：爱德华<span word="Edward">Edward</span>是个博学多才的哲学家，为人勤勉好学，严谨正派，他的子孙中，有13位当过大学校长、108位当过教授、86位是文学家、65位做过医生、21位当过议员、2位当过大使、1人做过副总统；而珠克是个远近闻名的酒鬼、赌徒，毕生无所事事，他的后代中，有300多人当过乞丐和流浪者、400多人因酗酒致残或夭亡、60多人犯过诈骗罪或盗窃罪、7个是杀人犯，没有一个有出息、有建树。为什么两个家族的境遇会有如此大的区别？重要原因之一，就是两个家庭的家风截然不同。</p>
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