2008年7月12日雅思A类范文解析的点评
<p> 小作文：</p><p> </p><p> 线图+图表。意思是在一个欧洲的国家的工作时间和假期。</p><p> </p><p> <span word="LINE">LINE</span> <span word="GRAPH">GRAPH</span> 是说<span word="Average">Average</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="per">per</span> <span word="week">week</span>：1998-2004</p><p> </p><p> <span word="TABLE">TABLE</span> <span word="CHART">CHART</span> 是很简单的图<span word="Average">Average</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="holiday">holiday</span> 1998-2004</p><p> </p><p> 大作文：</p><p> </p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="agriculture">agriculture</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="factory">factory</span> <span word="farming">farming</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="scientific">scientific</span> <span word="creation">creation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="fruits">fruits</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="vegetables">vegetables</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="oppose">oppose</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="development">development</span>.</p><p> </p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span></p><p> </p><p> <span word="Taking">Taking</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="historical">historical</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="agriculture">agriculture</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="easily">easily</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="rely">rely</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="trade">trade</span>, <span word="including">including</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mode">mode</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="think">think</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="petroleum">petroleum</span> <span word="industry">industry</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="methods">methods</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="unthinkable">unthinkable</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="adopted">adopted</span> ,<span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="factory">factory</span> <span word="farming">farming</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="inventing">inventing</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="types">types</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="fruits">fruits</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="vegetables">vegetables</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span>, <span word="whilst">whilst</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="oppose">oppose</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p><p> </p><p> <span word="Proponents">Proponents</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="traditional">traditional</span> <span word="agriculture">agriculture</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="slow">slow</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="mass">mass</span> <span word="production">production</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="food">food</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="already">already</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>. <span word="Also">Also</span> , <span word="factory">factory</span> <span word="farming">farming</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="profitable">profitable</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="rid">rid</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="impact">impact</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="climatic">climatic</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="pest">pest</span> <span word="invasion">invasion</span> , <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="drop">drop</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="nutrition">nutrition</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="utilized">utilized</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="grain">grain</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="food">food</span>. <span word="New">New</span> <span word="varieties">varieties</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="plant">plant</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="industrial">industrial</span> <span word="production">production</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="food">food</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="geneticists">geneticists</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="employed">employed</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="high">high</span>-<span word="yielding">yielding</span> <span word="species">species</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="breeds">breeds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="vegetables">vegetables</span>.</p>
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