11月8日雅思写作的解析及语料库
<p> 11月8日雅思写作小作文：</p><p> 柱形图：</p><p> 11月8日雅思写作大作文：</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="crime">crime</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="poverty">poverty</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>. <span word="Others">Others</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="crime">crime</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="nature">nature</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> 有人认为犯罪是贫困或者是他的社会问题的结果，有人 认为犯罪者人性本恶，讨论两种观点，给出你的观点。</p><p> 提问点评：新题出现，说完美押中的名师都是哗众取宠。</p><p> 2014年11月8日雅思写作小鹏哥押题：</p><p> 犯罪类：</p><p> <span word="Sending">Sending</span> <span word="criminals">criminals</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prison">prison</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="method">method</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="Education">Education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="instead">instead</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>? 将犯罪分子送进监狱不是有效的方式解决犯罪，我们应该给他们提供接受教育和工作培训的机会，是否认同?</p><p> 11月8日雅思写作题目解析：</p><p> 1. 周围的环境引起犯罪：贫困;择业难;校园暴力;枪支泛滥等</p><p> 2. 本性就是坏人：人性本恶，有人天生就是注定犯罪的</p><p> 薛鹏解析：两种观点讨论;必须支持给出的一方观点。</p><p> 两种观点讨论布局图：</p><p> 首段：背景介绍+争议焦点+ 作家立场</p>
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