11月9日雅思写作的解析以及原创范文
<p> 三段：谈及不同意的观点的合理性，再加以反驳：</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="might">might</span> <span word="remain">remain</span> <span word="suspicious">suspicious</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="standpoint">standpoint</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="every">every</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="unique">unique</span> <span word="approach">approach</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="relaxed">relaxed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="savor">savor</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span>. <span word="An">An</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="courage">courage</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="supposed">supposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="dare">dare</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="constantly">constantly</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="including">including</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="adventurous">adventurous</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="events">events</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="seek">seek</span> <span word="excitement">excitement</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="suffering">suffering</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="injury">injury</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="pain">pain</span>.</p><p> 翻译：有些人也许怀疑我的立场，毕竟，每人都有自己独特的方式来放松自己，品味快乐。有人也许认为，有勇气的人应该敢于不断自我尝试，体验新鲜事物，包括一些危险的运动。但是，为了追求刺激而受伤害太不值得。</p><p> 尾段：再次亮明观点 + 总结理由</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="final">final</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stress">stress</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="hasty">hasty</span> <span word="proposal">proposal</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="allow">allow</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="dangerous">dangerous</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="dive">dive</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="adventures">adventures</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="hurt">hurt</span>, <span word="meanwhile">meanwhile</span>，<span word="some">some</span> <span word="risky">risky</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="excuse">excuse</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="popularizing">popularizing</span> <span word="violence">violence</span>.</p><p> 翻译：总之，我再次强调我的立场，允许和鼓励危险性的运动是很草率的建议，因为那些从事冒险活动的人也许会受伤，同时，一些危险性的运动会成为暴力传播的借口。</p>
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