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<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="enroll">enroll</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="entrance">entrance</span> <span word="examination">examination</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="wants">wants</span>(主语是<span word="I">I</span>，改成<span word="want">want</span>) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pursue">pursue</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="department">department</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="inquring">inquring</span>(拼写错误) <span word="some">some</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="information">information</span>.</p><p> <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="you">you</span>(这是个陈述句，用<span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span>) <span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="admit">admit</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wonder">wonder</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="applicants">applicants</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="score">score</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="admission">admission</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="greatest">greatest</span> <span word="appreciation">appreciation</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="privide">privide</span>(拼写错误) <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="list">list</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reference">reference</span> <span word="books">books</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="explanation">explanation</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.<span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>.</p><p> </p>
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