考研英语作文范文批改(254)
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="English">English</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="inquire">inquire</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="questions">questions</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="recommended">recommended</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="week">week</span>.</p><p> <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="especially">especially</span>(这里应该用形容词，后面应该是名词)<span word="require">require</span>(这里应该用名词) <span word="but">but</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="bachelors">bachelors</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="English">English</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="tuition">tuition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="annual">annual</span> <span word="basis">basis</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="Is">Is</span>(<span word="is">is</span>) <span word="it">it</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attain">attain</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scholarship">scholarship</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="students">students</span>? <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="send">send</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="university">university</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>,(加连词<span word="and">and</span>) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="foraward">foraward</span>(拼写错误) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="favorable">favorable</span> <span word="reply">reply</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="earliest">earliest</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>.</p><p> </p>
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