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<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> , <span word="a">a</span>(用<span word="an">an</span>)<span word="undergrate">undergrate</span>(拼写错误) <span word="student">student</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Zhong">Zhong</span> <span word="San">San</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="university">university</span>(用学校正确的名字，首字母大写), <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="glad">glad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertise">advertise</span>(用名词<span word="advertisement">advertisement</span>) <span word="on">on</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="secretry">secretry</span>(拼写错误), <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="many">many</span>(改成<span word="some">some</span>) <span word="questions">questions</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span>:(去掉)</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>: <span word="if">if</span>(改成<span word="do">do</span>) <span word="you">you</span> <span word="define">define</span> <span word="age">age</span>? <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> 18. <span word="second">second</span>: <span word="if">if</span>(改成<span word="do">do</span>) <span word="you">you</span> <span word="limit">limit</span> <span word="speciality">speciality</span>(拼写错误)? <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="majored">majored</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="medicine">medicine</span></p><p> <span word="Third">Third</span>: <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="experence">experence</span>(拼写错误) <span word="on">on</span> <span word="secratry">secratry</span>(拼写错误), <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="specialize">specialize</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="writting">writting</span>(拼写错误) ,<span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="changce">changce</span>(拼写错误) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="trained">trained</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="skills">skills</span></p><p> <span word="Four">Four</span>:<span word="If">If</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="successed">successed</span>(拼写错误) <span word="in">in</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="salary">salary</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="treatment">treatment</span> <span word="With">With</span> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mine">mine</span> <span word="Look">Look</span> <span word="foward">foward</span>(拼写错误) <span word="your">your</span> <span word="writting">writting</span>(拼写错误) <span word="back">back</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="everyday">everyday</span>!</p><p> </p>
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