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<p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="art">art</span> <span word="design">design</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Tianjing">Tianjing</span> <span word="univesity">univesity</span>(具体的大学，首字母大写，注意要拼写对).(这不是一句完整的话，要引起注意!) <span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="advertise">advertise</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="your">your</span>(做主语用<span word="you">you</span>) <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="employ">employ</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="designer">designer</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span>(应该用所有格<span word="your">your</span>) <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="designer">designer</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="a">a</span>(应该用<span word="an">an</span>) <span word="outstanding">outstanding</span> <span word="desinger">desinger</span>(拼写错误). <span word="Frist">Frist</span>(拼写错误) <span word="and">and</span> <span word="foremost">foremost</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="art">art</span> <span word="design">design</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="eastblish">eastblish</span> <span word="rappot">rappot</span>(拼写错误) <span word="with">with</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="ages">ages</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="attition">attition</span>(拼写错误) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="teamwork">teamwork</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="gratitued">gratitued</span>(拼写错误) <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="request">request</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="earlist">earlist</span>(拼写错误) <span word="convenience">convenience</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>.</p><p> </p>
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