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<p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="please">please</span> <span word="allow">allow</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="introduce">introduce</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="briefly">briefly</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span>(<span word="graduate">graduate</span>) <span word="student">student</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Computer">Computer</span> <span word="Science">Science</span>. <span word="During">During</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="studying">studying</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="developed">developed</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="sofewares">sofewares</span>(拼写错误) <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="Management">Management</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="File">File</span> <span word="Management">Management</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="language">language</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="required">required</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="employment">employment</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="taked">taked</span>(<span word="taken">taken</span>) <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="outside">outside</span>-<span word="school">school</span> <span word="activities">activities</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="market">market</span> <span word="promoting">promoting</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="mobiles">mobiles</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="maths">maths</span>(拼写错误) <span word="and">and</span> <span word="computer">computer</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="practices">practices</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="rewards">rewards</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="employers">employers</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thirdly">Thirdly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="indeligent">indeligent</span>(拼写错误) <span word="and">and</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="with">with</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sustained">sustained</span> <span word="capability">capability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="stenghens">stenghens</span>(拼写错误).</p><p> </p>
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