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<p> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="became">became</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="hunter">hunter</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="week">week</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="obtained">obtained</span> <span word="a">a</span>(改成<span word="the">the</span>，<span word="information">information</span>是不可数名词) <span word="information">information</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="recruitment">recruitment</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>.</p><p> <span word="But">But</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="didnt">didnt</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="contents">contents</span> <span word="related">related</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span>(改成现在时，因为是现在想知道) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="detailed">detailed</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vacancy">vacancy</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="particularly">particularly</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span>:</p><p> <span word="Frist">Frist</span>(拼写错误), <span word="The">The</span> <span word="advertisemntmentiond">advertisemntmentiond</span>(拼写错误)<span word="an">an</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="worker">worker</span>, <span word="did">did</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="worker">worker</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="or">or</span>(加定冠词<span word="the">the</span>) <span word="same">same</span> <span word="job">job</span>?<span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="Do">Do</span>(<span word="does">does</span>) <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="accommadation">accommadation</span>(拼写错误)?</p><p> <span word="If">If</span> <span word="do">do</span>, <span word="will">will</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="expense">expense</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="included">included</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="paying">paying</span>?<span word="Third">Third</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="up">up</span> 2 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="network">network</span>，<span word="did">did</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="divided">divided</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="A">A</span>(<span word="a">a</span>) <span word="company">company</span>?(这些内容放在一段)</p><p> <span word="Could">Could</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="please">please</span> <span word="send">send</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="replies">replies</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="questions">questions</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="eariest">eariest</span>(拼写错误) <span word="convenience">convenience</span>? <span word="More">More</span> <span word="detailed">detailed</span> <span word="nformation">nformation</span>(拼写错误) <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="appreciated">appreciated</span>.</p><p> </p>
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