考研英语作文范文批改(208)
<p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="honor">honor</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>`<span word="s">s</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="promotion">promotion</span> <span word="schedule">schedule</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="searching">searching</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="agency">agency</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="effluence">effluence</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="project">project</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="case">case</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cope">cope</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="project">project</span> <span word="well">well</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="questions">questions</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="clear">clear</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="period">period</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="defining">defining</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="timing">timing</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="arranged">arranged</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="control">control</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="do">do</span>(应该用第三人称单数<span word="does">does</span>) <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="immediate">immediate</span> <span word="response">response</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="perspective">perspective</span>? <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="how">how</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="stage">stage</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="later">later</span> <span word="expense">expense</span>? <span word="It">It</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decision">decision</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scale">scale</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="project">project</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="desiderable">desiderable</span>(拼写错误) <span word="co">co</span>-<span word="operation">operation</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span>`<span word="s">s</span> <span word="trust">trust</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="terrific">terrific</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="working">working</span>(改成<span word="work">work</span>，一般用<span word="team">team</span> <span word="work">work</span>).</p><p> </p>
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