考研英语作文范文批改(211)
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="student">student</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>. (两句话最好换一下位置，我对你们公司感兴趣，想询问一些信息)<span word="Yesterday">Yesterday</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="bulletin">bulletin</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="website">website</span> .</p><p> <span word="Founding">Founding</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="introduction">introduction</span> <span word="conform">conform</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="strength">strength</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="here">here</span>, <span word="how">how</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="salary">salary</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="raise">raise</span> <span word="normally">normally</span>?</p><p> <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="holiday">holiday</span> <span word="per">per</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="welfare">welfare</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="me">me</span>? <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span>(注意前边有<span word="be">be</span>动词<span word="am">am</span>，改成<span word="appreciated">appreciated</span>)<span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="Looking">Looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> </p>
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