考研英语作文范文批改(175)
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="descide">descide</span>(拼写错误) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="taking">taking</span>(用动词原形，前面是不定式<span word="to">to</span>) <span word="the">the</span> <span word="National">National</span> <span word="Entrace">Entrace</span>(拼写错误)<span word="for">for</span> <span word="Master">Master</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Arts">Arts</span> <span word="Candidates">Candidates</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="know">know</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="represent">represent</span>(不能同时用两个动词) <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authority">authority</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Chain">Chain</span> <span word="now">now</span>.</p><p> <span word="Therefor">Therefor</span>(拼写错误), <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span>(去掉)<span word="questions">questions</span> <span word="asked">asked</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span>(用<span word="an">an</span>) <span word="art">art</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Ebglish">Ebglish</span>(拼写错误) <span word="side">side</span> <span word="respond">respond</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="weak">weak</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="what">what</span>(加谓语动词<span word="is">is</span>) <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="ability">ability</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="others">others</span>(<span word="another">another</span>), <span word="how">how</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="capability">capability</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="takes">takes</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="score">score</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pass">pass</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="test">test</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="soon">soon</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="heartfelt">heartfelt</span> <span word="wishes">wishes</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span>.</p><p> </p>
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