考研英语作文范文批改(196)
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="apology">apology</span>(这里应该用动词) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="forgot">forgot</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="return">return</span> <span word="a">a</span>(用定冠词<span word="the">the</span>) <span word="book">book</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="borrowed">borrowed</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="week">week</span>. <span word="Yesterday">Yesterday</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="bag">bag</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="sorry">sorry</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="present">present</span>.</p><p> <span word="Owing">Owing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="waiting">waiting</span>(<span word="must">must</span>后用动词原形，建议改成<span word="stay">stay</span> <span word="at">at</span>) <span word="home">home</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="month">month</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="donot">donot</span>(<span word="dont">dont</span> 或<span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span>) <span word="return">return</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="book">book</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="being">being</span> ,<span word="so">so</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="buying">buying</span>(改成<span word="you">you</span> <span word="buy">buy</span>)<span word="same">same</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="book">book</span>(语序应该是<span word="a">a</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="book">book</span>) <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span> .(这是个问句，用问号)<span word="perhaps">perhaps</span>(首字母大写) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span>(缺少动词) <span word="it">it</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="a">a</span>(用定冠词<span word="the">the</span>) <span word="post">post</span> <span word="office">office</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="you">you</span>(缺少动词) <span word="any">any</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="solutions">solutions</span> <span word="inform">inform</span> <span word="me">me</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sorry">sorry</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="carelessness">carelessness</span>. <span word="looking">looking</span>(首字母大写) <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> </p>
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