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<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="preventive">preventive</span> <span word="medicine">medicine</span>. <span word="Though">Though</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="sphere">sphere</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="it">it</span> . <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wisdom">wisdom</span> <span word="act">act</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="imformation">imformation</span>(拼写错误) <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span>, <span word="China">China</span> ,<span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span>(应该用不定冠词<span word="an">an</span>) <span word="authority">authority</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="institution">institution</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="first">first</span> (加不定式<span word="to">to</span>)<span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="connect">connect</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="pepole">pepole</span>(拼写错误) <span word="through">through</span> .</p><p> <span word="Third">Third</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="preventive">preventive</span> <span word="medicine">medicine</span> <span word="make">make</span>(保持主谓单复数的一致) <span word="great">great</span> <span word="progress">progress</span>, <span word="how">how</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="profit">profit</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="get">get</span>?<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span>(加<span word="your">your</span>) <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p><p> </p>
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