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<p> <span word="My">My</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="treasurer">treasurer</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="corporation">corporation</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="prompted">prompted</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span>(<span word="forward">forward</span>作为动词讲时是及物动词，去掉<span word="to">to</span>)<span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="review">review</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="convinced">convinced</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span>(加定冠词<span word="the">the</span>)<span word="right">right</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span>(去掉一个) <span word="three">three</span> <span word="point">point</span>(应该用复数，因为是三个)<span word="as">as</span> <span word="follow">follow</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="certified">certified</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="accountant">accountant</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="certificate">certificate</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Bachelor">Bachelor</span> <span word="degree">degree</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span>(与上面的<span word="qualifications">qualifications</span>重复，如果有不同，应该区别说明) <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span> <span word="handle">handle</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="responsibilities">responsibilities</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="accounting">accounting</span>. <span word="Lastly">Lastly</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="industrial">industrial</span> <span word="attitudes">attitudes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="professional">professional</span>, <span word="rigorous">rigorous</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="innovative">innovative</span>(这里应该用名词) <span word="could">could</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="complete">complete</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="distribute">distribute</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="devout">devout</span> <span word="appreciation">appreciation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="prompt">prompt</span> <span word="attention">attention</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="welcome">welcome</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="requirement">requirement</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="Look">Look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="again">again</span>.</p><p> </p>
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