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<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="iPod">iPod</span> <span word="Classic">Classic</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="updated">updated</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>?(这是个陈述句，用句号) <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="technique">technique</span> <span word="blog">blog</span> <span word="Engadget">Engadget</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="iPod">iPod</span> <span word="Classic">Classic</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="pull">pull</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stage">stage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="iPod">iPod</span> <span word="series">series</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> 23 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="now">now</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="loyal">loyal</span> <span word="consumer">consumer</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span> , <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="Apple">Apple</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> 5 <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="iPod">iPod</span> <span word="Video">Video</span> <span word="in">in</span> 2014 <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="totally">totally</span> <span word="attracted">attracted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="huge">huge</span> <span word="capacity">capacity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="nice">nice</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="words">words</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="describe">describe</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="Steve">Steve</span> <span word="Jobs">Jobs</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="alive">alive</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="answered">answered</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="stop">stop</span> <span word="updating">updating</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="iPod">iPod</span> <span word="Classic">Classic</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="latest">latest</span> <span word="released">released</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="havent">havent</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="iPod">iPod</span> <span word="Classic">Classic</span>. <span word="Honestly">Honestly</span> <span word="say">say</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="sad">sad</span>.</p><p> <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="confirm">confirm</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Classic">Classic</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="shall">shall</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="details">details</span>.</p><p> </p>
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