考研英语作文范文批改(166)
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="audience">audience</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="movie">movie</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="space">space</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="comes">comes</span>(前面已经有这句话的谓语动词了，这里应该用非谓语动词) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="cinema">cinema</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="yours">yours</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="heard">heard</span>(<span word="am">am</span> 和<span word="heard">heard</span>的时态要保持一致) <span word="from">from</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="establishing">establishing</span>(建议改成<span word="establish">establish</span>) <span word="a">a</span> <span word="cinema">cinema</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Road">Road</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="with">with</span>(<span word="from">from</span>)<span word="my">my</span> <span word="home">home</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="honor">honor</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="answer">answer</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="questions">questions</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="could">could</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opening">opening</span> <span word="day">day</span>? <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="comedy">comedy</span> <span word="movie">movie</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="month">month</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="cinema">cinema</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="Will">Will</span>(<span word="w">w</span>小写)<span word="you">you</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="preferential">preferential</span> <span word="activity">activity</span>? <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="holiday">holiday</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="t">t</span> <span word="o">o</span> <span word="watching">watching</span>.</p><p> </p>
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