考研英语作文范文批改(146)
<p> <span word="long">long</span>(<span word="l">l</span>大写) <span word="time">time</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="see">see</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="missing">missing</span>(什么丢了?). <span word="You">You</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Japan">Japan</span>?(没有谓语)<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="inform">inform</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="Japanese">Japanese</span> <span word="interesting">interesting</span> <span word="scenic">scenic</span> <span word="spots">spots</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="decided">decided</span> <span word="to">to</span>(加动词) <span word="a">a</span> <span word="trip">trip</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Japan">Japan</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="month">month</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="searched">searched</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="web">web</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinions">opinions</span> <span word="vary">vary</span>, <span word="let">let</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="idea">idea</span>(没有主语，这是中式化的表达，不要这样用).</p><p> <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hear">hear</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>. <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, (没有主语)<span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authentic">authentic</span> <span word="Janpanese">Janpanese</span>(拼写错误)<span word="food">food</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span>? <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="where">where</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="bubble">bubble</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="springs">springs</span>. <span word="Finaly">Finaly</span>(拼写错误), <span word="where">where</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="crazy">crazy</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="exhibition">exhibition</span>.(没有谓语)</p><p> <span word="Word">Word</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="soon">soon</span>.</p><p> </p>
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