考研英语作文范文批改(165)
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="middle">middle</span> <span word="shool">shool</span>(拼写错误). <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="organize">organize</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="town">town</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="historical">historical</span> <span word="exhibition">exhibition</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="inquire">inquire</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="information">information</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="size">size</span> <span word="of">of</span>(加定冠词<span word="the">the</span>) <span word="exhibition">exhibition</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="theme">theme</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="displayed">displayed</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="it">it</span>? <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="held">held</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opening">opening</span> <span word="time">time</span>?</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exhibition">exhibition</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="inquire">inquire</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="tickets">tickets</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="discount">discount</span>.(你第二段的内容不是很多，这一部分应该写在上一段) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="replay">replay</span> .</p><p> </p>
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