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<p> <span word="My">My</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="planing">planing</span>(双写<span word="n">n</span>) <span word="a">a</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="trip">trip</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Kyoto">Kyoto</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="summer">summer</span> <span word="of">of</span> 2014. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="weeks">weeks</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="official">official</span> <span word="tourism">tourism</span> <span word="board">board</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="wonder">wonder</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="want">want</span>. (以下内容另起一段)<span word="Could">Could</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="send">send</span> <span word="to">to</span>(去掉，<span word="send">send</span>是及物动词) <span word="us">us</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="brochure">brochure</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="pamphlet">pamphlet</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="listing">listing</span>(用第三人称单数形式，在从句中作谓语) <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tourist">tourist</span> <span word="attractions">attractions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Kyoto">Kyoto</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="map">map</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="there">there</span>.</p><p> <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cultural">cultural</span> <span word="traditions">traditions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="japan">japan</span>(首字母大写), <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thats">thats</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="Kyoto">Kyoto</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Japan">Japan</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="via">via</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="us">us</span>.</p><p> <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="send">send</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="items">items</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="address">address</span> <span word="above">above</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="glad">glad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="agency">agency</span> <span word="add">add</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="bonus">bonus</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="recently">recently</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="vacation">vacation</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="area">area</span>(建议去掉).</p><p> </p>
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