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<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="an">an</span>(用<span word="a">a</span>，<span word="university">university</span>虽然是元音字母开头的单词，但不是以元音开头的) <span word="university">university</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="July">July</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="moment">moment</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="on">on</span>(一般用<span word="in">in</span>) <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="employ">employ</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="excited">excited</span>.(这句话句子结构混乱，结构是：<span word="the">the</span> <span word="moment">moment</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="excited">excited</span>，应该是这件事儿让我兴奋)</p><p> <span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span>.(这一句话应该位于最后一段，第二段主要介绍你自己) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="prizes">prizes</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="contests">contests</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="language">language</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="literature">literature</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="university">university</span>.</p><p> <span word="For">For</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="study">study</span>, <span word="the">the</span>(用<span word="my">my</span>比较好) <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="literature">literature</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="largely">largely</span> <span word="improved">improved</span>.<span word="Thanks">Thanks</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. <span word="Look">Look</span>(<span word="Looking">Looking</span>) <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="soon">soon</span>.</p><p> </p>
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