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<p> <span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="May">May</span> 10,<span word="China">China</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="me">me</span>，<span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="provide">provide</span>(应该用过去时，因为广告已经刊登) <span word="there">there</span> <span word="exactly">exactly</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="seeking">seeking</span> <span word="for">for</span>.</p><p> <span word="Accoring">Accoring</span>(拼写错误<span word="providing">providing</span>)<span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span>，<span word="you">you</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="educated">educated</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="related">related</span> <span word="woking">woking</span>(拼写错误) <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span> <span word="above">above</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="form">form</span>(拼写错误) <span word="ShangHai">ShangHai</span>(<span word="h">h</span>不用大写) <span word="University">University</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span>(<span word="m">m</span>的发音是以元音开头，所以要用<span word="an">an</span>) <span word="M">M</span>.<span word="S">S</span>.<span word="degree">degree</span>(最好不要用缩写). <span word="And">And</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="relevent">relevent</span>(拼写错误，<span word="relevant">relevant</span>)<span word="company">company</span> <span word="before">before</span>. (这里可以再补充以下你有经验)<span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="passed">passed</span> , <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="communicate">communicate</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="native">native</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span>(建议用复数) <span word="freely">freely</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="English">English</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="built">built</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="ages">ages</span>.</p><p> </p>
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