考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改59
<p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="three">three</span>-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="transfer">transfer</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="development">development</span>. <span word="Today">Today</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recruit">recruit</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="proper">proper</span> <span word="person">person</span>.</p><p> <span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="contact">contact</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="spare">spare</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="number">number</span> 384756458. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Dean">Dean</span>:(英语中用逗号) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="three">three</span>-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="transfer">transfer</span>(加介词<span word="to">to</span>) <span word="your">your</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="development">development</span>. <span word="Today">Today</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="a">a</span>(用定冠词<span word="the">the</span>) <span word="news">news</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recruit">recruit</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="proper">proper</span> <span word="person">person</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="introduce">introduce</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="brief">brief</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="Foreign">Foreign</span> <span word="Language">Language</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="allocated">allocated</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="middle">middle</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="county">county</span>. <span word="During">During</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="achieved">achieved</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="certificate">certificate</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="convicted">convicted</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="competent">competent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="taught">taught</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="achieved">achieved</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="grades">grades</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="county">county</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="final">final</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="examination">examination</span> <span word="was">was</span>(改成<span word="that">that</span>或是去掉<span word="was">was</span>) <span word="held">held</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="semester">semester</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="prestige">prestige</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="interview">interview</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span>(这里 需要一个形容词) <span word="and">and</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="contact">contact</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="spare">spare</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="number">number</span> 384756458. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span> 点评：6分表达不够简洁。注意细节。</p>
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